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%PoeticalCondition critique - Nice topic - Well delivered - Quite insightful I am a huge fan of being myself ... although people seldom...


:devpoeticalconditions: critique. This is a delightfully interesting piece, though I am not a fan of long poems but this one in particu...

The Walls of Unsaid by zancan
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A particularly beautiful piece. It is actually amazing how much this simple picture conveys. 1) the fact that the modern society is sev...

This Week's Deviant: :iconshehrozeameen: shehrozeameen 


I KNOW I KNOW I'm 4 days late ... but here it is ... this week it's one of my close friends, 
Shehroze Ameen (other than being the person to introduce me to dA) is a very splendid poet and prose composer and his writing truly speaks for itself... so without further ado I will artwhore all of my favorite works of his on this journal post because he is awesome :dummy:

MSC #9 - SpenserianIrony - crucial for new ideas
From these lands where dreams are buried skin deep
That none may know there had been such areas
Hence for society's progress their steep
Arcane Morals should not be made to creep
Into the psyche for thus does it lead to
Stagnation and decay to slowly keep
Their presence in society turns true
If they do not come we cannot construe
These ideas which give meaning to lives
We would be nothing more than what we knew
These sheep feed from Mother Earth's blessed hives
Irony builds what we take for granted
Ideas - irony our minds planted
  Rub'i of Ghoststhe ghost in the fog whispers goodbye;
without its shell, without hope, his cry
for salvation is lost in the haze,
where his voice utters: when will I die?
  Shadows in the DraperyThey watch and they make their sounds
Their empty sounds without voices – a bark coming round
Emptiness in their faces, a myriad… a web made from laces
These shadows that dance so lucidly their enchanted dance in phases
They call out to their cry a cry to be cried out in vain
But behind their incense is a disgusting malice seeking pain
Disdain…. Such pitiful disdain…
Myriads of shapes, and with shadows forming beyond
The emptiness consuming, the masquerade of confusion
In lands they carry their sounds of woeful tragedy – such hypocrisy
Their temptation to aid and displease is left in vain for the world to see
Leaving behind the incantation of an orifice, senescence gaping away
Grasping and killing these masked folk – their resurrection at bay
The truth of their lies; are gaping cries of the crow which sighs
For help in the reclusion
To seek what had dawned
But was never attained
As the empty voices of sounds… of barks coming round
Make for them as the
  Captain Ulmar Wenceslas LockhartCaptain Ulmar Wenceslas Lockhart
It was not a sight for the faint hearted, that I can tell thee
To see my Captain fighting his enemy, and break free
And live to fight another day, to explore the endless blue sea
Alas that is life, such are things meant to be
 
My Captain was Ulmar Wenceslas Lockhart, God be with the man
Sailed many seas he did, those who fought him were damned
None could be saved when they faced Lockhart, all feared his plan
To bring down the Odyssey, to which end he never ran
This is the story of Captain Lockhart, and his brave last stand
 
The Odyssey’s captain was no ordinary fool
He was Lockhart’s equal, affluent in all trades and tools
He was Nicodemus Bartholomew “Lockhart”
“Lockhart” because he equaled my Captain in every art
 
From the Port O’ Leon to The guild town Hall
Numerous times they blocked the seas; all
to themselves they kept the battlefield;
But alas, their efforts provided no yie
   The warrior's call"I saw the breeze of midsummer's bloom;
the leaves aloft, kissing the autumn goodbye;
Like them I embraced my impending doom
wrought in sorrow... tears dropping from the sky..."
The warrior uttered his last words
And embraced his fate - the unheard
demise bound the army; for he was a conscript
embracing his fate, aloft, the autumnal leaves slipped...
  Quatrain VIFitzgerald style Rubi
I wait by the pillars, the wind's respite
is a credence whose hearse ignites my sprite;
I wait for thee, oh pristine Aurora
glowing brilliantly like the Northern Lights!
  Quatrain VMy Lord Sent Me Isabella
From the Lord's commandment, gifted from His Hearse,
and thence birthed, as enchanting as Persian verse;
from His noble poems, a beauty carved with love -
Sweet Isabella, pearlescent drops from the Kingdom Above
  Rub'i of Dreams ForlornThe bliss of the wind, that pours by the trees
The ailment of regret, such is what she sees
For her spirit is lost, disenchanted, strayed
From the dream she had known - lost in fantasies
 

Mission Accomplished :salute:

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Danyal Ajaz
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What you see is what you get simple plain and unpretentious... mostly sane

if however you feel like gore and darkness go meet the masked man :iconhaggass: to satisfy your demented side

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:iconlostkeep:
LostKeep Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Hi Danyal, thanks for checking out my work :)
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DannyMechanist Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome
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Vega-Master Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry for the late response, but thank you for the watch.
That was rather nice of you.
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DannyMechanist Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome :)
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jackskarma Featured By Owner May 19, 2014   Digital Artist
Hello Danny
How are you today ?
I hope that your week end was good and wish you a good week ;)
I just wanna thank you for fav' my stuff ! A true thank you ;)
Have a good day !!!
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DannyMechanist Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome... :)
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jackskarma Featured By Owner May 19, 2014   Digital Artist
;)
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DannyMechanist Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome... :)
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otterwillow Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much for the watch :D (Big Grin) 
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DannyMechanist Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome
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